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FatBoySr
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My Life For Aiur: Ground Zero
Cronoss has uploaded Chapter 9 of My Life for Aiur, entitled Ground Zero, on APP. I didn't think it was as interesting as his previous chapters, which I thought were not as quite hand to hand with real StarCraft. But it's for you to judge. Here we follow Ethan further into Djakel, here's a little snippet:
"Directly in front of Ethan (albeit several kilometers down) the North Chau Sea spread in a shimmering carpet of waves for several hundred miles, over the North Pole to the shores of the continent on the opposite side of Chau Sara from Djakel. Turning one-hundred and eighty degrees, Ethan faced directly south, revealing a good portion of the rustic Djakel Starport. Ethan clambered towards the bunker window railing, which was about four feet off of the bunker’s grated floor, giving him a better view to the spectacles to the south. Below him and the bunker’s edge, the Ridge’s cliff sloped out – a dark mass of what seemed to be angles and protrusions, until it descended directly into the green, murky and polluted Djakel Lagoon. Within the city, even from this height, Ethan could make out thousands of virocars – mere blips of light – zooming around between the city’s dusty grey skyscrapers..."
Be looking forward to the next chapter as Cronoss gets his mind working again. Check out the chapter here.
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